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The plan below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopmet next year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting themain features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given scheme illustrates the present state of the airport and the estimated plan for the redevelopment in the following year. Currently, the airport can offer only a handful of amenities, which is expected to be changed, and a brand new cafe
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 a car hire and an ATM will be added in the arrivals
hall
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,
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 the departures
hall
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 will only get a bag drop. The number of gates is envisioned to nearly double, allowing a larger flow of passengers in the airport. Speaking of gates, there are only 8 present, and 10 more will be added.
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, the whole area for them will be enlarged and formed in the shape of a bird tail that way there will left and right aisles, which will be connected in the middle. There, a sky train line will be placed, replacing the current walkway. Right before the departure security and passport control shops will be added
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 the main departure
hall
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 remastered. The check-in desk will be on the opposite side of the
hall
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, which will lead the cafe to be relocated closer to the departure exits. That free space would allow us to add a bag drop. On the right side of the arrivals
hall
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, 3 aforementioned amenities will be added,
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 as a cafe, an ATM, and a car hire.
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, the number of doors in both of the halls will be doubled.
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