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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015
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The bar chart provides information about how many
households
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 the US regarding their annual
income
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 in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, it can be seen that, from 2007 to 2015,
households
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 with
income
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 less than $50,000 slightly increased.
In contrast
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,
households
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 with incomes exceeding $75,000 witnessed a minimal decrease before rebounding. During
this
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 interval,
households
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 with annual mid-level incomes remained stable. Regarding
households
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 with incomes below $50,000, 25
million
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 had
initially
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 an annual
income
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 of under $25,000, after which it had risen close to 30
million
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 by 2011, prior to falling slightly to around 27
million
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 in the final year.
Households
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 who made between $25,000 and $49,999 yearly mirrored
this
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 trend, albeit at a higher rate, starting at approximately 26
million
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, peaking at exactly 30
million
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, before ending at around 29
million
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. Meanwhile,
households
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 falling within the
income
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 range of $50,000 - $74,000 were the only category experiencing no changes, staying unchanged at approximately 22
million
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. In terms of
households
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 with annual earnings of above $75,000, there were nearly 15
million
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 earning $75,000 - $99,999
initially
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, but it later climbed to precisely 15
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 the end of the period despite the insignificant dip by 2007. Similar changes, but to a much greater extent, were observed in the figure in
households
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 with the largest
income
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 range (above $100,000), growing from just under 30
million
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 to nearly 34
million
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 in 2015.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "initially".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, income, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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