The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015
The bar chart provides information about how many
households
in
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the US regarding their annual
income
in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, it can be seen that, from 2007 to 2015,
households
with
income
less than $50,000 slightly increased.
In contrast
,
households
with incomes exceeding $75,000 witnessed a minimal decrease before rebounding. During
this
interval,
households
with annual mid-level incomes remained stable. Regarding
households
with incomes below $50,000, 25
million
had
initially
an annual
income
of under $25,000, after which it had risen close to 30
million
by 2011, prior to falling slightly to around 27
million
in the final year.
Households
who made between $25,000 and $49,999 yearly mirrored
this
trend, albeit at a higher rate, starting at approximately 26
million
, peaking at exactly 30
million
, before ending at around 29
million
. Meanwhile,
households
falling within the
income
range of $50,000 - $74,000 were the only category experiencing no changes, staying unchanged at approximately 22
million
. In terms of
households
with annual earnings of above $75,000, there were nearly 15
million
earning $75,000 - $99,999
initially
, but it later climbed to precisely 15
million
in
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the end of the period despite the insignificant dip by 2007. Similar changes, but to a much greater extent, were observed in the figure in
households
with the largest
income
range (above $100,000), growing from just under 30
million
to nearly 34
million
in 2015.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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