In some countries, companies allow people to work from home. In others, people are still expected to work in an office. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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era, many young
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are lazy and fewer young
people
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want to do
sports
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activities
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. A lot of young
people
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are less interested in
sports
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activities
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. They prefer to do any other
activities
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except
sports
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. In
this
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essay, I will give some solutions to solve
this
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case and give the reason why young
people
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are less interested in
sports
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. These days, many young
people
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are addicted to their
gadgets
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. Most of
teenegers
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teenagers
give their attention to mobile
games
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. They can spend their whole day playing their mobile
games
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because they just want to sit and play the
games
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. They should not spend their energy doing
sports
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activities
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.
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, young
people
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can spend their time just
laying
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lying
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on their bed and playing
some
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apply
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mobile
games
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so they will not do any other
activities
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except
sports
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. In these
cases
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parents
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have to give their attention to their
children
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. The
parents
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have to talk to their
children
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and give some advice to reduce their interactions with their
gadgets
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. The
parents
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also
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have to give some motivation to their
children
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to do other
activities
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.
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,
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parents
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give their
children
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time
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a time
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limit
of playing
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to play
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with their own
gadgets
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and give some knowledge about
benefits
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the benefits
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of playing
sports
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to encourage their
children
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to do
sports
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activities
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. All in all, many young
people
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are lazy and prefer to spend their time with their
gadgets
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. But these things can be solved by their
parents
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’ guidance.
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