A woman's place is in the home. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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decide
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to decide

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the role of women and men on
thier
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their

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own.
Traditional
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notion of women is to be
Home-maker
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. But I completely disagree with the fact that we should decide the women's place. In
this
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I will point out why I disagree with the above point. It should be in
hands
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of
person
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the person
a person

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. In the modern world, we
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assign the role There are many people out in the world who are working outside and making
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name. example:
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sunitha williams
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Sunitha Williams

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, Mary
curie
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender equality
  • domestic sphere
  • professional sphere
  • equal opportunities
  • economic growth
  • workforce participation
  • diverse perspectives
  • problem-solving
  • innovation
  • individual choice
  • personal preferences
  • societal expectations
  • traditional gender roles
  • outdated notions
  • shared responsibilities
  • family dynamics
  • healthier relationships
  • balanced lives
  • educational investments
  • talents
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