A woman's place is in the home. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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the role of women and men on
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Traditional
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notion of women is to be
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. But I completely disagree with the fact that we should decide the women's place. In
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I will point out why I disagree with the above point. It should be in
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of
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the person
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. In the modern world, we
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assign the role There are many people out in the world who are working outside and making
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Sunitha
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sunitha williams
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Sunitha Williams
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, Mary
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