Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

I was born and raised in a small city in Mazandaran which is called Babolsar,

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the fact that it’s a small city, my hometown is famous simply because of its sand beaches and amazing river

that

is

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crosses

of

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the city. The first thing

comes

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to mind is not as crowded as other cities in Mazandaran and

on the other hand

, because of its sea and

river

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you will be witnessed of

expectacaular

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spectacular

scene

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in every season.

Although

I am too busy

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my

works

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these days , I am trying to make plans with my wife to experience new things which

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new malls, restaurant, and even new foods. We both are foody and willing to taste different

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of foods. Well in actual fact, if I think about it,

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time

and dividing it among

works

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, hobbies and my responsibility as a husband

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breath taking

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for me these days since I am occupied by my job most of the

time

and

in

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result

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I am

tiered

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most

the

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time

. So all in all my answer would have to be no,

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not easy for me. If I want to answer

this

question, I would say a little about my job. I have

management

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title in one of the biggest

company

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, and because of

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I have too many

responcibilities

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responsibilities

which I have to attend

.

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Well

to

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be honest, during work hours I always lose

time

and

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shocked every

time

I watch

a

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clock, In

fact

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it is hard to allocate

time

. Of

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I’d have to say that I’m not so keen on being busy. To be precise, I really can’t separate

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my work life and my

after work

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life. If I had more

time

, I would spend more quality

time

with my wife and our mutual friends .