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government investment in public transport and reductions in public transport prices will greatly help the figh against transport pollution Do you agree or disagree ?

#government #investment #transport #reductions #prices #figh #pollution
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Public
transport
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 is one of the major sectors which help to increase the income of nations. So the authorities should invest and decrease the prices of it to encourage people to
use
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 it rather than private
transport
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 to decrease
pollution
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. I totally agree with
this
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 statement.
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, I will discuss that in detail. On the one hand, public
transport
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 has a lot of benefits for the
government
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 and individuals. With regard to the
government
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, public
transport
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 helps the
government
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 to limit
pollution
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 by using a few vehicles.
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, in the morning, the population goes to work and most of them do not
use
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 their own cars. In
this
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 case, the
government
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 avoid two problems.
Firstly
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, the
pollution
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 and
secondly
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, the crowd.
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, when most people
use
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 public
transport
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 they will pay for
government
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.
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, individuals will save their money and time when they
use
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 public
transport
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.
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, some people do something useful on public
transport
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 as reading a book or surfing the Internet rather than paying attention to the streets.
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, they avoid crowds and pay less money to the bus driver than that which will pay if they
use
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 private cars. In conclusion, public
transport
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 has many many benefits rather than private
transport
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.
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, public
transport
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 is more comfortable and has a good size.
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, it limits the
use
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 of cars which helps to reduce
pollution
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.
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