In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. some people think that this is good for a country while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Give your own opinion.
It is admittedly true that paying high
salaries
can give extra motive among the Use synonyms
employes
Correct your spelling
employees
while
others believe that authority should control Linking Words
salaries
. In Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
essay
I am going to Add a comma
,essay
examing
the question from both Correct your spelling
examine
of
Change preposition
apply
view
and give relevant examples.
To Fix the agreement mistake
views
began
with, it is remarkable that when Change the form of the verb
begin
people
earn more money, they get motivation Use synonyms
innerself
. It Correct your spelling
inner self
is influence
them to do their Change the verb form
influences
work
perfectly and Use synonyms
make
them spontaneous all the time. Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
For
Linking Words
example
every organization always try to give the best things to their employees and give them extra salary waste Add a comma
,example
on
their Change preposition
apply
work
. In Use synonyms
the
Correct determiner usage
this
way
their Add a comma
,way
employes
can Correct your spelling
employees
spontaneous
Add a missing verb
be spontaneous
on
their Change preposition
in
workplace
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, every person should deserve their Linking Words
salaries
based on their Use synonyms
work
Use synonyms
otherwise
they would be Linking Words
dimotivate
Correct your spelling
demotivate
demotivated
on
the Change preposition
in
workplace
which outcome might be outrageous for a company.
Use synonyms
However
, there are some positive effects of earning limited money. Most of the time money creates some Linking Words
drawback
between poor and rich Fix the agreement mistake
drawbacks
people
. They started showing disrespect Use synonyms
with
each other which is a major problem for society Change preposition
to
as well as
for a country. Many times rich Linking Words
people
think that they should deserve more respect than other Use synonyms
people
but when a government can control Use synonyms
everyone
Change noun form
everyone's
salaris
Correct your spelling
salaries
this
problem can Linking Words
be reduce
Change the verb form
be reduced
from
society. Change preposition
by
For instance
, in Linking Words
China
they control the Add a comma
,China
pays
Correct subject-verb agreement
pay
extra
Change preposition
of extra
salaries
and they pay everyone the same salary for the same position. It helps them to create a good environment in their Use synonyms
workplace
and spontaneously they will respect each other in their Use synonyms
workplace
.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, it is true that both Linking Words
side
has Change to a plural noun
sides
positive
and negative effect but in my Add an article
a positive
perspective
everyone should deserve their Add a comma
,perspective
pays
based on their Fix the agreement mistake
pay
work
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
people
should respect each other in the way they can live a good life.Use synonyms
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