You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your Town Centre is different from most other towns centres offer to give a guided tour of your Town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you with regards to your article published in the 'Myanmar Times' newspaper dated 27th August 2023. Your article described that there are no single differences among the town centres across Myanmar.

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, I completely disagree with your opinion. It is true that the shopping facilities offered in almost every town centre are similar in main building structures, parking spaces and status of General Aung San.

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, my town centre had a significant difference from others in terms of entertainment facilities and decorations which are considered a great challenge in many shopping complexes. It has been a place for community gatherings where people experience more fun and involvement in many fun-filled activities.

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, it has well-established lighting designs for the whole building and a lot of plants when compared to other malls. I would be grateful if I could arrange a guided tour to explore the place in order to provide you with the perspective to look at these centres in different ways. Looking forward to you giving a positive response to my statement. Yours sincerely, Ella

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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