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Some people think that a person can never understand the culture of a country unless they speak the language. Do you agree with opinion?

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Assimilation is unquestionably one of the most prevalent and worrying issues in any society these days. Of course, it is possible to get to know some cultural aspects through excursions or visiting museums.
However
, I consider a
language
 to be an
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integral
 part of a country,
therefore
 its learning is extremely important. On the one hand, there are several opportunities which could help
imigrants
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immigrants
migrants
 to understand the culture of the new area.
Firstly
, nowadays there is a number of guides
offerring
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offering
 different fascinating excursions in order to show the most
exiting
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 museum, galleries or
exibitions
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exhibitions
. Visiting these
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facilities
 could introduce some crucial
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 of the state's history and bring an imagination of its development.
Secondly
, humans who want to know more about a specific state should spend some time
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searching
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 information on the Internet. Without a doubt, understanding of significant factors
such
 as history,
religions
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religion
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 and politics could explain the problems and challenges
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 by the nation,
therefore
 when a person is familiar with these aspects, it would be easier to understand
emotions
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 and worries of inhabitants. On the other way, I agree that speaking a local
language
 is the best way to be involved in
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.
To begin
 with, there are hundreds of expressions
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 can not be directly translated,
consequently
, it is difficult enough to use them without having some experience.
For instance
, it is known that people use a lot of slang which provides information about all trends and upcoming issues,
therefore
 it is
usefull
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useful
 to know their meaning.
Furthermore
, a lot of
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 could be known only through communication,
therefore
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 ability to speak a foreign
language
 has valuable benefits. Without a doubt, finding local friends is the best decision in order to assimilate in the new region.
To conclude
, despite varying opinions, I reckon that a local
language
 plays a crucial role in the culture of a country. As a
conequence
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consequence
, it definitely should be learnt in order to understand the
developmnet
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development
 of the society.
Submitted by sofsya.fedorenko.2001 on

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