The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The line graph compares the figures for commuters travelling in three categories, by bus,
car
, and train in a period of 61 years, from 1970 to 2030 in the British.
From the statistics, it can be inferred that in stark contrast with two other transportation, bus travellers experience a steady fall throughout the period shown. On the other hand
, it is clear that
both cars and trains have become popular transportation and have increased significantly.
In 1970, the number of daily commuters by car
was in the top of 3 categories standing at 5 million
. In contrast
, usage of buses and trains made up the second and third figures at 4 and 2 million
, respectively. Also
, it is clear that
between 2000 and 2010 the number of car
and train users remained unchanged while
bus travelers constituted a mild fall.
By 2030, despite the figure of people who expected to commute by car
and train jumped to 5 and exactly 9 million
, the utilization of cars is predicted to drop to just under 3 million
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