It is better for student to study from home rather than go to school. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some people believe that pupils should learn at

home

rather than go to any

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of academy . Despite the truth that

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at

home

may

contains

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some

advantage

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,

but

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lots of people have

a

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thought that

go

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to

schools

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is even better. From my perspective, I

thinks

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that schools teach children how to solve some problem they could face in their future life. Sometimes, the students will find that life is not easy

like

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they thought and hard to get

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it, the academies would teach them how to stand up to fight against it and never give themselves up.

Besides

that,

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the scholar

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scholar

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can make a lot of friends during their

school-period

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and

this

is important. They will be instructed how to work as

agroup

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a group

, and

also

help

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their teammate.

This

can lead to other success in their future career.

For instance

, they might reach higher

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due to

their working skill as a team and their leadership. Another point worth considering is that the true level. In the test at the education centre, it is more difficult to copy their friends or even cheat in their exams

while

it is quite easier at

home

, where you could do anything that your teachers may not ever know.

Last

but not least, I think that the instructors play a crucial

roles

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while

the

scholar

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were

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studying, especially in some small

grade

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. The tutor were one of the first people they had met in their life, so they may consider them as an “idol” and can mimic their action,

leads

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them to the kind and reliable resident in the future. Studying at

schools

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seems to

be bring

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more benefits but some parents would let their child stay and learn at

home

.

This

is because of their pride in their juvenile had inherited their genes and just to learn some

leading

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skills. I think

this

is not a wise decision but when

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it

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again, it may

contains

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some benefits. In conclusion, I think that studying at school is more beneficial than at

home

but we should check their abilities and

also

listen to their wish and

then

give a perfect selection.