Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There has been a controversy about animal
experiments
used currently.
While
some people support these
experiments
because of their benefits for human society, I would regard
this
approach as somewhat immoral and unnecessary. On the one hand, the rise of new diseases or pandemics,
such
as Covid 19, has forced scientists to develop new medicines as soon as possible to prevent them.
Therefore
, the safest way for the community is to do tests on
animals
before implementing or spreading these new vaccines.
Moreover
, some animal
experiments
also
help build up and provide solutions to secure and protect other species from disappearing and enhance their immunity against bacteria.
On the other hand
, doing tests on
animals
could be unethical behaviour.
Due to
these actions, the governments may foster detrimental mindsets on children and involuntarily encourage them to harm other things freely.
In addition
, allowing animal
experiments
could encourage the destruction of the environment. The authorities should ban companies that are free to do harm and test wild
animals
illegally for their commercial purposes
such
as chemical companies and personal care firms. In conclusion, there are both good and bad views on animal testing.
However
, I strongly believe that the government should be careful in accepting these
experiments
and have clear guidelines
as well as
related laws to protect
animals
and environments for specific aspects and industries.
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