You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, • tell him/her about the gift • tell how you want to send the gift to this friend • explain why you chose this gift for your friend

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Dear Mathew, I hope
this
letter finds you in high spirits and in good health. I was extremely happy to receive your letter
last
weekend. Anyways, I have got you a
smart watch
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smartwatch
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from London for your
birthday
this
month
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end.
To begin
with, when I first saw
this
smart-watch I immediately decided to gift it to you. As you keep
a
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track of your physical health daily, I found
this
gift to be perfect for you.
This
is an Apple Watch Series 8 with
44
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MM wide touch display in aqua blue
color
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. It is water resistant
,
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and
also
has
calorie
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and step counter which helps in monitoring your daily activities.
In addition
to that, the
built in
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speaker enables you to answer
to
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calls and text messages.
However
, I am sending it to you via FedEx courier services which shall deliver it in a couple of days at your home. I hope you like your
birthday
present. I hope to celebrate your
birthday
when we meet next summer.
Lastly
, Happy
Birthday
to you in advance. All the best, Katie.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • thoughtful gesture
  • cherished
  • unique features
  • functionality
  • mailing
  • courier service
  • safely and on time
  • interests
  • needs
  • hobbies
  • emotional significance
  • symbolic significance
  • reinforces
  • meaningfulness
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