The table shows the changes in modes of travel in a European country between 1995 and 2025. It also shows a projection to the year 2015.

The table shows the changes in modes of travel in a European country between 1995 and 2025. It also shows a projection to the year 2015.
The table provides data about expenditure of users on various terms in
Ireland
, Italy,
Spain
,
Sweden
and
Turkey
.
Overall
, all countries spent mostly on food, drinks and tobacco,
while
the smallest spending was on
leisure
and
education
. The highest
percentage
of spending was on food, drinks and tobacco in
Turkey
,
while
the lowest proportion of spending was on
leisure
and
education
in
Spain
. In terms of food, drinks and tobacco
Turkey
spent more than other countries (32%), which was twice as much compared to Italy,
Spain
and
Sweden
, namely 16 %, 18% and 15 % respectively.
Ireland
spent 4% less than
Turkey
.
Moreover
,
Turkey
spent twice as much on
leisure
and
education
as
than
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Ireland
, 4% and 2% respectively. Italy and
Sweden
had a similar
percentage
of spending on
leisure
and
education
, about 3%. With regards to clothing and footwear, the highest
percentage
of spending was in Italy, namely 9%.
However
,
Sweden
spent 4 % less than Italy and was the lowest
percentage
over the period in question.
Turkey
,
Spain
and
Ireland
had similar proportions of spending , namely 6%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ireland, spain, sweden, turkey, leisure, education, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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  • Transportation preferences
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  • Technological advancements
  • Urban policies
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  • Infrastructural developments
  • Projection
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  • Technological innovations
  • Electric vehicles
  • Smart public systems
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