Most of our information comes from the internet nowadays. Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect. Do you agree or disagree?

It has always been argued that in
this
contemporary era, technology is proliferating regularly most of the knowledge
people
can get from cyberspace,
whereas
opponents claim that almost it is incorrect. I partially agree with
this
given statement and
this
essay shall shed light upon my perspective in subsequent paragraphs. Foremost, why much
information
comes from the
internet
?
This
is because
of
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there are
number
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a number
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of verified pages and accounts on social applications
such
as Instagram, Facebook, Twitter and many more.
Which
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provide
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information
to the public
what
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is going society and the latest
update
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updates
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with the assistance of
this
people
may be aware
from
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upcoming hurdles.
For instance
, an article published by The Tribune newspaper showed that in the state of
Punjab
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there are many small towns and villages where more than 4,000 houses disappeared because of flooding and approximately 300
people
died, so accurate data provided by the
internet
to the population now the majority of individuals migrate to out of state for survival.  Paradoxically, the fundamental reason behind my disagreement is that nowadays there are many commoners on social sites who give wrong
information
to human beings
with
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this
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they do not have awareness about the world.
Consequently
, they may face major problems.
For example
, a survey conducted by Harward University revealed that these days around the world there are a number
scammers
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who spread wrong
information
among
people
by hyperspace and it has an adverse impact on
people
's lives.
To conclude
, I agree with both
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because the
internet
is a thing that changes
people
's
life
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lives
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and
provide
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provides
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correct
information
if
people
choose verified pages and channels, whilst some are
hacker
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hackers
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or scammer on the
internet
it is not beneficial for them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • misinformation
  • disinformation
  • fake news
  • verification
  • credible sources
  • digital literacy
  • social media algorithms
  • fact-checking
  • media bias
  • critical thinking
  • echo chambers
  • clickbait
  • peer-reviewed
  • information overload
  • confirmation bias
  • user-generated content
  • search engine optimization (SEO)
  • viral content
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