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In many countries woman no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not repent the financial security that marriage country. To what extent do you agree?

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It is often thought that there is no need for
women
 to be married in some countries because they are able to work and earn money, and they do not search for the financial security that a
marriage
 provides them with. Even though
this
 phenomenon emerges in some countries, I completely disagree with
this
 view. At the outset,
marriage
 is one of the most important events in our life for humanity, as; it creates a strong relationship between a woman and a man. So, both of them represent a cornerstone for any household anywhere all over the world, but these days some
women
 are not married,
This
 trend appears in some societies
due to
 certain reasons,
For example
; girls do not find suitable boys that they should marry them.
In addition
 to that, some
women
 prefer to make a relationship with men through a partnership,
instead
 of
marriage
, so if they decide to leave each other, they will separate easily without a need for a divorce.
Furthermore
, some girls do not like to marry because they do not want to take any responsibility for their new families.
Also
, the relationship between men and
women
 is a natural and essential link, so; each one has a desire for the other, Despite
this
;Some ladies like to stay alone because stressful life conditions lead to serious problems between wives and husbands that result in a divorce,
hence
; they do not want to experience the same sadness experiments. In conclusion,
however
, there are specific reasons that decrease the rate of
marriage
, but I do not agree that the ability of
women
 to work and earn money is one of them because
women
 have worked for a long time, and they know how to earn money mainly to support their families
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