The graph below gives information abouth the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The graph illustrates the information about the rate of people that live in cities among four nations from Asia,
which
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Philippines
, Malaysia
, Thailand
and Indonesia
, during the period from 1970 to 2020 and the forecasts for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that the percentage of the population
of all four areas increased in the 50-year period, and it is predicted to be upward in 2030 and 2040. Malaysia
has the highest proportion of city
residents compared to the others.
In 1970, around 30% of the population
of Malaysia
and Philippines
lived in the Correct article usage
the Philippines
city
, the figure for Malaysia
increased to more than 70% in 2020, while
the Philippines
had fluctuated between 30% and 50%.
Thailand
and Indonesia
had nearly 20% and more than 10% of their population
in cities in 1970, respectively. However
, Indonesia
's city
population
rocketed and reached about 60% in 2020, while
Thailand
had reached only about 30%.
The figures for four countries are all predicted to grow by 2040. The percentage of city
residents in Malaysia
will be the highest, more than 80% and
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Indonesia
at around 60%. In Philippines
and Correct article usage
the Philippines
Thailand
, the proportion of people living in the city
will be about 50% and 45%, respectively.Submitted by tu.diepminh on
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