Nowadays more and more business meetings and business training are taking place online.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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and training is
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online. In
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virtual life where
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companies are
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trying to do their work
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online. In recent times, they
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to do their crucial parts
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and training
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online. In
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way not only they can save their money but
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they can save their time. They can arrange a meeting
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anywhere
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they don't need to wait for anyone because
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can join from their workplace or home.
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, many people want to complete their internship
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a good company but
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it's impossible because a limited place or workplace is far from their home. So
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online
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they can complete their training from anywhere.
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, in 2022 Microsoft company announced that every student can complete a (AI) course from their website and they will
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provide training for good students.
On the other hand
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, It's a great opportunity for a company to meet with
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and people
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physical
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. They can discuss their problem face to face and it would be easy for them to solve their problem.
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, they would have some time to spend with each other which is rare to find in online meetings.
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, it is true that for online,
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can complete their training from anywhere but they
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get an office environment from online.
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, everything has positive and negative sides but online meeting and training is more convenient than offline.
Everyone
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can complete the work easily from anywhere.
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