The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The graph illustrates how many
enquiries
were received by the Tourist Information
Office in a city during six-months
in the year 2011.
Correct your spelling
six months
Overall
, it is clearly seen that these 3 different lines represent 3 different ways of getting information
from tourists. The number
of enquiries
received directly significantly increased but the figure for enquiries
received by letter or email decreased.
In January, the Tourist Information
Office received about 450 enquiries
in person, while
about 790 ones were sent by email or letter. Most tourists chose to get information
through telephone
, at 900 calls. In Correct article usage
the telephone
two
following months, the Correct article usage
the two
number
of enquiries
face to face continuously grew to 800 meetings, but not surpassing
the figure for telephone.
From April to June, the Wrong verb form
surpass
number
of enquiries
via letter or email had a downward trend. In contrast
, the office received a lot of enquiries
in person and telephone
. Change preposition
by telephone
Moreover
, the data witnessed the number
of enquiries
received directly increased significantly and ranked 1st in this
graph ,with a figure of 1900 in June.Submitted by ieltsamiedu on
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