It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is suggested that primary

kids

need to learn how to grow vegetation and keep

animals

.

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these skills. But

according to

me, it seems like the downside of the suggestion outweigh the upside for various reason which we will discuss in

further

paragraphs. To initiate with the advantages for

kids

in terms of growing

vegetables

and keeping

animals

. The first and foremost benefit is knowledge, pupils can learn about the various

kinds

of vegetation and their detriment to their fitness. Not only

this

but, they can

also

learn about the different

kinds

of skills like sowing, watering and gardening at an early age.

Furthermore

, it can make them aware of a healthy diet and lifestyle.

For instance

, there are so many

vegetables

like carrots, and capsicum cucumber that have numerous benefits and are used as a source of minerals and vitamins.

Moreover

, by keeping the

animals

they can learn about the various personality traits like love and honesty.

For example

, Dogs are known for their loyalty towards their owners so

kids

can learn

this

behaviour from them. Despite having benefits, growing plants and keeping

animals

have disadvantages too. The primary one is the concern related to their

health

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because growing

vegetables

and plants need pesticide to control the attack from small insects. Pesticide includes high-intensity chemical which is harmful to

kids

and their

health

. Another possible reason is soil, which is contaminated with different

kinds

of pesticide control chemicals and dangerous insects, which

further

leads to skin problems like allergies, rashes and swelling.

Apart from

this

, keeping

animals

can lead to different

kinds

of diseases which can prove dangerous to their physical and mental

health

.

For instance

, having a cat and dog in the house creates a loving environment but

also

greater the risk of rabies as they have more germs than other

animals

.

To conclude

, despite having benefits, for

kids

to learn how to grow

vegetables

and keep

animals

like knowledge it has more dangerous

health

issues among children.