It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is suggested that primary

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need to learn how to grow vegetation and keep

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these skills. But

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me, it seems like the downside of the suggestion outweigh the upside for various reason which we will discuss in

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paragraphs. To initiate with the advantages for

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in terms of growing

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and keeping

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. The first and foremost benefit is knowledge, pupils can learn about the various

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of vegetation and their detriment to their fitness. Not only

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but, they can

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learn about the different

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of skills like sowing, watering and gardening at an early age.

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, it can make them aware of a healthy diet and lifestyle.

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, there are so many

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like carrots, and capsicum cucumber that have numerous benefits and are used as a source of minerals and vitamins.

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, by keeping the

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they can learn about the various personality traits like love and honesty.

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, Dogs are known for their loyalty towards their owners so

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can learn

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behaviour from them. Despite having benefits, growing plants and keeping

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have disadvantages too. The primary one is the concern related to their

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because growing

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and plants need pesticide to control the attack from small insects. Pesticide includes high-intensity chemical which is harmful to

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and their

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. Another possible reason is soil, which is contaminated with different

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of pesticide control chemicals and dangerous insects, which

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leads to skin problems like allergies, rashes and swelling.

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, keeping

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can lead to different

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of diseases which can prove dangerous to their physical and mental

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, having a cat and dog in the house creates a loving environment but

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greater the risk of rabies as they have more germs than other

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, despite having benefits, for

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to learn how to grow

vegetables

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and keep

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like knowledge it has more dangerous

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issues among children.