Many people aim to achieve a balance between work and other parts of lives， but few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problems? How to overcome it？ Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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distribute their

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to work or do their own things,

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small number of them achieve

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aim.

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has become a hot spot to discuss,

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essay will talk about

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my perspective of how to solve

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is most

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people

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don’t have the

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ability

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to really dominate their own

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, those who want to balance their

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need to

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to have certain skills to deal with

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issue, The distribution of their

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is actually a really rare talent to be born with, as the research,

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actually is the result of scientific after-born education. To solve

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issue,

people

have to take some relevant

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to master

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skill. The second reason is nowadays

people

are stressed out, especially in developing countries, citizens have almost no

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to do things they like.

Works

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and transportation almost

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their every day.

Additionally

, the increasing demands and expectations from employers and society as a whole

also

contribute to the imbalance between work and personal life. Many

people

feel pressured to constantly work longer hours, take on more responsibilities, and achieve professional success at the expense of their well-being and relationships.