Some People claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

Some
people
say that
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not enough of the
waste
from
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are
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recycled and the only way to speed up the process of recycling
of
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waste
is to implement strict laws by
government
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.
This
essay strongly agrees with the
above mentioned
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view point
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and will
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R'S
that
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is reduce, recycle and reuse we can easily handle our
homes
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waste
.
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distribution
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of
dustbin
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can
also
help in
this
regard. From
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very
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early time, it has been said that we can properly manage the dumping material by following
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three
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R's which stand for reduce, reuse and recycle. But the issue is, it's very hard to implement that. So, it requires extra effort from the authorities to implement
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strict laws like fines,
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on
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general
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public
those
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who do not follow these rules. The steps will surely help to attain
target
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of recycling.
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, officials of
respective
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department
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should make categories of fines and other strict actions
according to
the
waste
of the
homes
and the shops and in case someone
do
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not follow these rules he/she should be dealt
accordingly
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.
Furthermore
,
recycling
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process could
also
be
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up by
public
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awareness drive. Arranging seminars in schools and colleges about
the
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waste
disposal and
by
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distributing dustbins to collect recyclable items will help a lot in
this
regard. As most of the community like to participate in
such
event
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about cleanliness,
so
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these
people
will definitely help the authorities to spread the message of dumping, reusing and recycling the
wastes
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waste
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from
the
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homes
.
For instance
, more than 50% of the
waste
of the community was recycled in
area
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the area
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due to
cleanliness
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the cleanliness
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drive by local
people
. So
overall
, I suggest that government either needs to impose strict rules or they need to check daily progress
report
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reports
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about
recycling
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the recycling
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process in order to handle
waste
from the home, they can
also
train local
people
for
this
purpose.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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