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You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend's house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • thank them for having you at their house for a week • express your gratitude for their hospitality . say how much you miss them

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Dear Liza, I hope
this
 letter finds you in good health and high spirits. Well, it’s not been too long that we haven't met, yet it feels much longer. I indeed had a wonderful time at your home. I am truly touched by the hospitality that I
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received
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stayed at your house. I appreciate you for accommodating me for a week on
such
 short notice.
Furthermore
, I enjoyed having traditional meals at your home and how your mother packed food just like my mother when I left for my training. Obviously, the family time spent together in the evenings over a cup of tea and
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 snacks
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 made me feel
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 a part of your family.
In addition
 to that, the
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 conversation with you about all aspects of life was like a stress-buster for me. To sum it all up, I am thankful to you and your family for not just accommodating me but
also
 making me feel like a family member. I miss you all so much and looking forward to
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 you soon. Lots of love, Janie
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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