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the plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

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The given maps compare the facilities and their locations in a public park at first opening in 1920 and today.
As
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 an
overall
 perspective, a cafe, an amphitheatre for concerts, a
water
 feature, and an area for children have emerged in
this
 period of time.
In addition
 to the advent of new options, some old ones are closed now
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 instance, a stage for musicians, a fountain, and a pond for
water
 plants. It is clear from the figures, that the glass house and some seats have been substituted by a
water
 feature adjacent to the entrance underground car park. On the north side of there, the pond for
water
 plants has been cleared up and
instead
 of that a children’s play area has been established.
Additionally
, one of the three rose gardens which was between the ARNOLD AVENUE entrance door and the pond has been replaced by a cafe. As it is obvious from the maps, the western seats and the southern rose garden have disappeared and in their
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 an amphitheatre for concerts has been opened.
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 a central fountain is replaced by a rose garden which is surrounded by some seats.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recreational facilities
  • landscaping
  • naturalistic
  • amenities
  • formal gardens
  • ergonomic
  • symmetric designs
  • inclusive
  • accessible
  • accommodations
  • native plant species
  • societal changes
  • visitor services
  • community events
  • evolution
  • modern playgrounds
  • wildflower meadows
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