It is better for students to study from home rather than go to school. Do you agree or disagree with the statement.

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students

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and some people think that education from

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is the best option

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others

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to

school

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much better.

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writer totally

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with the statement and there are some reasons.

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can be easier and faster if you have some guilders or teachers. Education can be seen as the most important source of each body because of its crucial but

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teenagers who are in their adolescence

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not aware

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and really abandon

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their

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study

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.

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, they need someone to force them

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study

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, pupils in primary

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who called children really keen on playing or something else more interesting than theory

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they

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will spend most of

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their time

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to phay

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instead

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of studying.

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,

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study

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environment or peer pressure in

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positive way can make you feel like you need to

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now or you will lose

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your score In general,

students

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are addicted to smartphones or technology equipment so if they

study

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at

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, their concentration will be on their smartphones. Take covid-19 pandemic as an example,

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students

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who studied online have virtual

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and when they come back

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school

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they do not have any knowledge about their lessons so it can be seen as knowledge gaps of

students

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in

these year

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, you can make more friends if you

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at

school

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instead

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of studying at

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In conclusion, if

students

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want to

study

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from

home

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, they need to have discipline and self-

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spirit. From my point of

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students

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should adapt to

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study

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environment and go to

school

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.