It is better for students to study from home rather than go to school. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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modern
time
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times
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, education become more and more important in their life. Around
this
issue, many people
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that studying at home
bring
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brings
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more benefits than at
school
. From my point of view, I totally disagree with
this
statement. First of all, studying at
school
will create
the
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supportive atmosphere which can help you
on
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in
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the process of learning. It is undeniable that studying at
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with the guidance of a cluster
of
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can help learners
pratice
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practice
practise
their discipline. For
an
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instance, during the COVID-19 period, all of the
school
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schools
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must be closed by the impact of
this
pandemic. For that reason,
students
had to study online at home through a
screne
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screen
of
laptop
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, TV,
mobile
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or mobile
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phone
instead
of going to
school
.
Although
this
method can maintain the study of them, it
also
bring
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brings
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the
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disadvantages for the teachers
on
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in
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managing their
students
. One of these is that nobody can guarantee that their
students
focus on the lesson all
the
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apply
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day without doing anything else. Another point worth considering is that going to
school
help
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helps
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students
advance themselves. When people go to
school
, they easily gain useful knowledge and ask the teacher
about
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the
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questions which
you
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can not understand. Not only that,
school
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the school
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also
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is also
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the
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a
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place where you can make friends with people from
other area
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another area
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of
country
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the country
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. For
an
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example, when you study at the boarding
school
, you can communicate with new friends from many provinces
on
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in
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your country. It can help you know about the culture and cuisine in many regions of your nation. Taking everything into consideration, learning at home
also
play
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plays
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a crucial role in their life but it can not
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be compared
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with the benefits of going to
school
because of awareness and communication. Let’s
joing
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join
the class at
school
if
you
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apply
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possible.
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