. It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In
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fast-paced world ,
risks
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are unpredictable and have a major impact on one's own life. Uncertainty is paramount for inhabitants, not only in their private lives but
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non-amateur lives. I anticipate that upsides and downsides stand on the equilibrium. The essay will depict both sides of the topic , in the subsequent paragraphs in detail.
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, threats unexpectedly lead to perks in individual lifestyles.
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, threats are obvious in family and paid entities, which influence our lives for well-being and financial growth.
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,In secret activities, these are taken to implement a great education for children and if that person is the bread earner take up
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for the survival of the family, at the office these are taken up as challenges to achieving growth.
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, citizens take
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in borrowing money from banks or well-wishers for the purpose of children's education ,
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at the
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some of the projects are obtained out of risk just to gain a position. Even though they are risky, still they gain more upsides.
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, dangers have a huge influence on survival and drag to downfalls. As
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Peril most of the time leads to a soul threat and
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in paid activity.
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, in a work environment , projects that have been implemented would lead to a financial outbreak.
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, intimate life
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has demerits
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as funds obtained from an authority signed with terms and conditions and if not settled they would greatly damage the reputation and lead to economic fall.
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, downsides will great damage but it could be predictable.
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, by consuming
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both merits and demerits play a salient role in life and greatly disturbs the environment. In my point of view, both play an equal role,
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, there may be plus or minus. To achieve a goal influenced by menace, some precautions could be followed that might protect from uncertainty.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Opportunities
  • Growth
  • Innovation
  • Challenges
  • Self-discovery
  • Resilience
  • Uncertainty
  • Consequences
  • Calculated risks
  • Stagnation
  • Regret
  • Comfort zone
  • Entrepreneurship
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Thriving
  • Failure
  • Mitigate
  • Reap the rewards
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