The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
number
of foreign visitors to three various parts of a European country over 20 years, from 1987 to 2007.
Use synonyms
Overall
, what stands out from the line graph is that the Linking Words
number
of visitors from the 3 areas increases throughout the given period. Use synonyms
While
the coast accounts for the highest percentage, the mountains are the lowest.
In 1987, the Linking Words
number
of people visiting the coast was around 40,000, before the figure dropped in 1992 by approximately 5,000. Use synonyms
However
, after that it experienced a rapid increase and reached its highest peak in 2007, reaching an average of over 70,000 visitors.
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On the other hand
, the river had the lowest Linking Words
number
of guests in 1987 at 10,000 people but still managed to increase dramatically and reach its highest point in 2002 at approximately 75,000. Use synonyms
However
, after that year the average suddenly plummeted by at least 25,000 in the final year. Linking Words
On the contrary
, the average of people who hiked on the mountain saw a steady rise but the average remains around 20,000 to 40,000 hikers.Linking Words
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