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Some people think that secondary/high school students should study literature (e.g. novels, plays, poetry) only from their own country. Others say it is more important for students to study literature from all over the world. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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People have differing views with regard to the question of how necessary for children to
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literature
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 some argue that
students
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 should
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literature
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 from all nations in the world, I believe that children just need to
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this
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 kind of subjects from their
countries
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 Admittedly, there is good reason to say that
students
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 should
study
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 from all over the world.
To begin
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 with, studying from all nations can ameliorate their expertise.
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, if Vietnamese recruiters
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 Korean
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, they can enrich their
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 about
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 country.
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, they can enhance their awareness of
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 country's culture.
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,
students
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 learning about the biographies of other
countries
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 can
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 help them make friends more easily than ever. They can attract an ever-widening circle of people who have the same passion for
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 In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that people do not need to
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 about other
countries
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 and just need to put resources into
literature
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 from their own
countries
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.
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, during the time learning about other
countries
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, perhaps
students
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 will learn some
information
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 in other languages.
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 will leave them unable to read and struggle to know the meaning of it. Another reason why it is unnecessary for
students
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 to
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literature
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 from other
countries
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 is that
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information
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 may become senseless. If they do not go abroad, they do not need to use
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information
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. Too much knowledge
also
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 makes
students
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 want to relinquish In conclusion, studying from all over the world still has a lot of benefits for
students
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 including gaining more knowledge and making friends easily.
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, I require
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 from their own country rather than
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 from all nations.
Students
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 can have some difficulty in understanding and studying the abroad knowledge
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