In many countries, people are now living longer than before. Some people say an aging polulation creates problem for governments. Other people think are benifits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The

life

span of people

contains

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more

years

in most parts of the world now. One group claims that

this

is a cause for some issues,

while

the other one supports that it is advantageous. I believe that pros are more than cons. There are two reasons

of

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this

. One of them is that if the society mainly consists of

grown ups

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,

this

will lead to the leadership of mature ideas amongst

population

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the population

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. The other cause is about enough time to reach inner peace.

Firstly

, over the

years

humans

try

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to find

out

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the right ideas to follow. There are not numerous

various

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apply

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ways

of

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to

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happy

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a happy

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life

. The

standart

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standard

is primarily keeping balance in every field.

Thus

, if

majority

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the majority

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of

population

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the population

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share

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similar approaches,

this

will create a desired type of society.

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, inhabitants of an island of Japan, called Okinawa, are almost seniors. The lifetime is frequently over a hundred

years

.

Furthermore

, the residents strongly advise not to rush, to do exercises and

meditade

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meditate

.

This

island's citizens are admirable.

Secondly

, a long period allows

to

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us to

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experience,

analize

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analyze

analyse

and come

into

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a

conclution

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conclusion

to start with more confidence. Nowadays, millions of people work hard to spend some peaceful moments. It really takes time to get

the

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point. A great deal of elderly members,

for instance

; become milder as

years

pass because they can clearly realize the core of everything. To summarize, two distinct statements are supported about the effect of seniors

to

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on

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government

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the government

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. Some believe it is detrimental,

however

; the rest say

this

is profitable. I am for the latter because

of

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apply

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the old

has

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have

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an opportunity of utilizing their

experence

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experience

to

estabilish

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establish

a place of well-mannered humans.

Moreover

,

life

tests,

then

,

teaches

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. So, a longer

life

is necessary for a variety of experiments.