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The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.
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The chart illustrates the data about international
tourism
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, daily product and meat product
that is
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 exported to different countries over the 25 years. The amount of
money
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 is counted by billions.
Overall
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, the figures for international
tourism
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 are increasing dramatically,
however
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, the trends of meat
products
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 are decreasing over the given period. It is interesting to note that the figures for dairy
products
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 are fluctuating. Looking at the charts in more detail, Southland gets the highest amount of
money
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 on international
tourism
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 approximately 8 and 9
billion
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 in 2000 and 2023 respectively.
Furthermore
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, it is predicted to get 10
billion
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 euro in 2025.
Nevertheless
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, the number of
money
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 earned by meat
products
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 is the lowest trend, which is 6 and nearly 5.5
billion
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 in 2000 and 2023. It is expected to get 5
billion
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 euro in 2025. When it comes to the level of earning
money
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 from dairy
products
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, it was not so good
at the end
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 of the 20th century,
while
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 it detected a significant increase in 2023, at almost 10
billion
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 euros which is the same as the predicted figure
of
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for
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 international
tourism
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. Unfortunately, it is estimated to be a slight plunge in 2025, reaching about 9.5
billion
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 euros.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourism, money, products, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exports, main exports, projections, trends, significant changes, increased, decreased, speculate, external factors, global demand, technological advancements, trade policies, agriculture, technology, manufacturing, economic implications, employment, GDP, economic growth, global economic trends
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