You recently attended a series of English lessons in a language school. However, you were unhappy with the teaching quality. Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter: •explain why you chose to study English at the school •describe the problems you had with the lessons • suggest how the classes could be improved
Dear Mr White
I am writing to inform you about my unsatisfactory experience at your language school. I have attended the Business English course at the B2 level for two months.
When I was informed by your marketing expert before the enrollment, it was told me that your programme was quite different from the traditional one. Your educational techniques were designed more technologically and up-to-date
according to
business needs.
I had attended two different language schools before. However
, I haven’t seen any different aspects and approaches compared to the traditional language courses. There are no special training books, equipment and special programmes. Almost all the lessons have been followed with the course book. If I work at home on the same coursebook, I most probably will have the same achievement. Therefore
, I couldn’t get any benefits from attending these lessons.
I would suggest improving your training materials' quality and encouraging speaking activities with different projects. Students may give presentation
or do role play as in a real working environment. Fix the agreement mistake
presentations
Therefore
, teachers can orientate the students according to
their needs. Provided there is no change, I don’t want to be too direct but I wouldn’t continue the school when my level finishes. I feel quite upset that I am losing my time.
For your kind information.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
JaneSubmitted by nilufer.korkmaz on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite