The medical technology is responsible for increasing the average life expectancy. Do you think it is a curse or a blessing?
Nowadays
technology
is developing day by day and It is indeed a fact that the use of technology
in medical
field has increased the average Add an article
the medical
life
span of human
. I believe that it is Fix the agreement mistake
humans
definately
a boon for mankind. Correct your spelling
definitely
This
essay will further
elaborate my views.
To begin
with, There are a plethora of reasons that the
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apply
technology
is blessing
. First and foremost Add an article
a blessing
is
deadly diseases can be cured now. Unnecessary verb
apply
For example
, tuberculosis can be treated by using various medicine
and therapies. Fix the agreement mistake
medicines
Hence
, people
can go back to their normal life
and can live longer than expected. Furthermore
, Some medicine and suppliments
are Correct your spelling
supplements
best
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the best
option
to get all the Fix the agreement mistake
options
nutritients
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nutrients
such
as vitamin
B12, C and D to get proper nourishment for Fix the agreement mistake
vitamins
body
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the body
as well as
to maintain good bone health.
On the contrary
, some virus
and Fix the agreement mistake
viruses
pathogenes
are dangerous for human Correct your spelling
pathogens
being
but Fix the agreement mistake
beings
the
technological advancement saved Correct article usage
apply
the
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milion
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millions
life
. To clear
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clarify
that
, COVID-19 almost Correct pronoun usage
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stoped
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stopped
people
from going work and to do
daily chores but just because of the research in medical Wrong verb form
doing
techology
proved to be the greatest blessing Correct your spelling
technology
all
time as they found Change preposition
of all
vaccine
for that and saved millions of Add an article
a vaccine
life
by using it on Fix the agreement mistake
lives
people
. Moreover
, due to
the
medical Correct article usage
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technology
some surgeries are possible today which was almost Add a comma
,technology
impposibe
in previous years. To illustrate, brain Correct your spelling
impossible
tumor
and some other cardiovascular diseases are easily treatable now than past. Fix the agreement mistake
tumors
Therefore
life
expectancy of people
is increasing.
To summarise, by agglomerating all the points aforementioned above , it is true that the technological progress in medical department
has Fix the agreement mistake
departments
boost
the normal Change the verb form
boosted
life
span of human being
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beings
as well as
getting them fit and healthy. I totally agree that it's been a blessing for every human and the goverment
should widen Correct your spelling
government
it's
use and spend money on medical Replace the word
its
technology
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