The medical technology is responsible for increasing the average life expectancy. Do you think it is a curse or a blessing?

Nowadays
technology
is developing day by day and It is indeed a fact that the use of
technology
in
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field has increased the average
life
span of
human
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. I believe that it is
definately
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definitely
a boon for mankind.
This
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further
elaborate my views.
To begin
with, There are a plethora of reasons that
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medical
technology
is
blessing
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a blessing
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. First and foremost
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deadly diseases can be cured now.
For example
, tuberculosis can be treated by using various
medicine
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and therapies.
Hence
,
people
can go back to their normal
life
and can live longer than expected.
Furthermore
, Some medicine and
suppliments
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supplements
are
best
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option
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to get all the
nutritients
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nutrients
such
as
vitamin
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B12, C and D to get proper nourishment for
body
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as well as
to maintain good bone health.
On the contrary
, some
virus
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and
pathogenes
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are dangerous for human
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but
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technological advancement saved
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milion
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millions
life
. To
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that
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, COVID-19 almost
stoped
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people
from going work and to
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daily chores but just because of the research in medical
techology
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technology
proved to be the greatest blessing
all
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time as they found
vaccine
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a vaccine
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for that and saved millions of
life
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by using it on
people
.
Moreover
,
due to
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medical
technology
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some surgeries are possible today which was almost
impposibe
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impossible
in previous years. To illustrate, brain
tumor
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and some other cardiovascular diseases are easily treatable now than past.
Therefore
life
expectancy of
people
is increasing. To summarise, by agglomerating all the points aforementioned above , it is true that the technological progress in medical
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has
boost
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the normal
life
span of human
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beings
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as well as
getting them fit and healthy. I totally agree that it's been a blessing for every human and the
goverment
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government
should widen
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use and spend money on medical
technology
.
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