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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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Many food and drinks
products
 contain a large amount of
sugar
 which is one of the reasons to the growing in many health problems. Some suggested that we should make these
products
 more expensive to discourage using
products
 with high level of
sugar
. I disagree with
this
 idea and I will explain why and some other ways to make
people
 consume less
sugar
 in
this
 essay. There are several reasons for why we shouldn't make high levels
products
 expensive:
firstly
, rising
products
' price suddenly might make a controversial in the social, the sweet community will not accept
this
 easily, they will fight for that and the government will lost their frust.
Secondly
, rising the price will bethe fundamental for the fake, low-quality
products
. These thing are rare now but it will be popular if rise the cost of
products
 because it more affordable. I think the maxium is 2-3 times and if
people
 like it they will buy it again. There are other solutions rather than up rising the
products
' cost:
firstly
, the company which producing these
products
 should change from using
sugar
 to chemical sweeten favours which have been accepted by the WHO, so the
products
 contain less
sugar
 but still have the sane sweet.
Secondly
, launch some campaigns about healthy food to lower the heath problems and give
people
 alert to
people
 about the impacts of consumer high level of
sugar
.
Overall
, I think go the governments should not raise the
products
 cost because it will be very controversial
instead
 they should launch some campaigns about protecting our heath and use chemical sweeten favour to replace normal
sugar
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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