The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity
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The given chart provides information on the proportion of different ages of
people
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in the United Kingdom who donated money to charity over a period of ten
years
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between 1990 and 2010. Units are measured in percentage.
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, it can clearly be seen that the number of
people
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who donated money in 1990 was higher except for those who were over 50
years
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old. In terms of the
people
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aged 36-50, they contributed the most with roughly 42% in 1990 before dropping to exactly 35% in the following period. Whilst the 26-35s shared around 10% lower, those under the age of 25 gave only about 17% which was the lowest in the first year. In the following ten
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, the percentage witnessed a moderate drop of approximately 24% and 6%, respectively. Regarding the ones aged between 50-65
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old, the number of
people
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who contributed to charity experienced a steady increase compared to the younger ages from 35% to just under 40%, which was the highest for 2010.
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, the figures for
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over 65
years
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saw a slight rise of around 3% and ended at exactly 35% in the
last
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year.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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