The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish. Write a summary of the information.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish. Write a summary of the information.
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The picture provides information about salmon’s maturation.
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life process begins with the existence of the
eggs
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in freshwater and ends when the salmon lays
eggs
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. The first stage in the repetitious life cycle is clumps of
eggs
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staying in unsalted water hatch
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approximately 3 months after it was given birth.
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it leaves its sac and is called Alevin. For the following several weeks, Alevin consumes its own yolk sac to take the
nutritions
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nutrition
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for growing up and
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becomes a fry. At
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stage, Alevin starts to swim when they are 5 weeks old. In the next period, as the parr is a few months older, some “finger” markings appear all over the body. The process of living in freshwater lasts up to 3 years,
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, the Smolt join together to form a group and move toward the salty water. Since the adult salmon reaches the sea, it spends the majority of its life up to 8 years there before reproduction.
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, in order to lay
eggs
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, the adult individual swims back to the freshwater, which is the salmon’s spawning ground. Since
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,
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repetitious cycle
starts
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again.
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