The 3 pie charts illustrate the rate of 4 types of transport are driven in the United Kingdom in 1996, 1985 and 2005.
These 3 pie charts demonstrate the share of 4 kinds of vehicles in the UK over 3 different years
such
as 1996,1985 and 2005.
Overall
, we can see that private cars increased in number while
recreational ones had a steady fall over the period in question
Regarding the share of public transport
in 1965 it took a quarter of all transport
being at 25% nevertheless
lorries and recreational vehicles have a marginal difference of 5%, 20 and 15 per cent respectively.
In 1985 interest in private cars rocketed to 55 per cent but recreational ones lost a significant part of the customers ending up with only 5 per cent. While
public and lorry transport
had an equal number of users.
Finally
, in 2005 despite the fact that personal automobiles were still at the peak with 60% of occupations the interest in public vehicles increased slightly to 2% in contrast
to 1985, when lorries and commercial transport
lost their popularity and decreased twiceSubmitted by Abdu.abetayev on
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