ou and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter • introduce yourself • explain what is wrong with the furniture • say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear Mr. Biboo My name is H.Israfilov and I stay in the rented house at 15 Johnny. B. street with a family of 5. We moved in

at the end

last

year, just before the birth of our younger child. I'm writing in regard to the inconveniences with furniture in the kids' room that we have faced recently. The construction of the two floored beds became unstable and migrated slightly from one side to the other.

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, it produces

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noises with every vibration caused by the movement during sleep that awakes all inhabitants of the house. I kindly ask you to find a solution to

this

issue. No need to replace the whole set of furniture as there are a number of companies that focus on furniture restoration. From my perspective, it will be much cheaper than buying a new one. Looking forward to your prompt response, Sincerely Yours, Habib

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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152 words

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