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ou and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter • introduce yourself • explain what is wrong with the furniture • say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear Mr. Biboo My name is H.Israfilov and I stay in the rented house at 15 Johnny. B. street with a family of 5. We moved in
at the end
 of
last
 year, just before the birth of our younger child. I'm writing in regard to the inconveniences with furniture in the kids' room that we have faced recently. The construction of the two floored beds became unstable and migrated slightly from one side to the other.
Moreover
, it produces
the
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noises with every vibration caused by the movement during sleep that awakes all inhabitants of the house. I kindly ask you to find a solution to
this
 issue. No need to replace the whole set of furniture as there are a number of companies that focus on furniture restoration. From my perspective, it will be much cheaper than buying a new one. Looking forward to your prompt response, Sincerely Yours, Habib
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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