The chart andgraph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.

The chart andgraph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart andgraph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.
The
bar
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chart
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illustrates the
number
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of male and female
participants
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in the
Olympics
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in 4 different years, from 1924 to 2012. It compares the
number
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of the two genders participating in
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event.
On the other hand
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, the line graph shows the total
number
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of
athletes
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in the
Olympics
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but in the same years as the
bar
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chart
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and it has an increasing pattern. Looking at the
bar
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chart
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it is apparent that the female
athletes
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are increasing more rapidly than the male ones, as there were few female
participants
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in 1924 and as we can see there are more than 4000 females playing in 2012. As for men, there is a difference and the
number
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of male
athletes
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in the
Olympics
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is rising in a linear manner. As we can guess from the
bar
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chart
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, the total
number
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of
athletes
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is increasing too. The graph illustrates that the
number
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of
participants
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from 1924 to 2012 has
became
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tripled, as there were about 3,000 players participating in 1924, when the
number
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got over 10000. In summary, both charts somehow show the same thing with the
bar
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chart
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sorting the
athletes
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by their sex. Both charts show an increase in the
number
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of
participants
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and as we can see there are still more male players in the
Olympics
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words bar, chart, number, participants, olympics, athletes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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