The two pie charts illustrate why British do migration to and from during a question period.

The two pie charts illustrate why British do migration to and from during a question period.
The given pie charts provide information about the British and the reasons why they migrated to or from the UK in 2007. In the first pie,
people
who
immigrate
for definite jobs dominate the chart
as well as
in the second one.After the
people
who choose to
immigrate
for definite jobs, they are followed by
people
who choose to
immigrate
for formal studies,despite that in the second chart for emigration there is an enormous change as the
people
who emigrate for formal studies are a few ones,
also
there is a slight increase in
people
who emigrate for work than
immigrate
for work.
Nevertheless
,there is
also
a huge comparison between
people
who
immigrate
for no reason stated and
people
who emigrate for no reason stated. As we can see in 2007 the
people
who chose to
immigrate
or emigrate to the UK were almost the same, the difference is one per cent as the results are 30% , and 29% respectively. The most important feature is that
people
who
immigrate
for formal studies are 26%,
while
people
who emigrate are only 4%.
Also
, there is a slight increase for folks who emigrate for work having 22% ,
while
on the other ,side it is only 12%.
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