The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris's parents. In your letter ·say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party ·explain why you won't be able to attend the party ·give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time

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Dear Mr. and Mrs. Evans, I was very glad to receive

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to the surprise party of my friend. As I know him well enough to predict his reaction, I no doubt, that

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is going be a memorable day for him.

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, I anticipate lots of birthday pictures to be posted by him on social media pages. Unfortunately, I have a planned trip to my hometown on those days and will be out of town starting next Monday. I asked my parents if I could stay with Grandpa, as he is always glad to see me but got a negative answer to that proposal.

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, I bought a gift for Chris and I'm planning to present it after my arrival. If it is possible I would like to come to your place on Saturday and surprise my friend personally. I'm pretty sure

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is going to be a unique pleasure

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him. I hope

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will be acceptable to you, Yours sincerely, Habib

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Ensure clear and direct responses to each part of the task. Use specific details to explain why you won't be able to attend the party and provide a detailed plan to see Chris at a different time.

coherence and cohesion

Work on organizing your ideas to create a smoother flow between sentences and paragraphs. Use transition words and phrases to improve cohesion and coherence.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

164 words

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