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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society? Give reasons for your answer. Agree or Disagree Write at least 250 words.

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In the
last
 decade, there has been considerable debate over the role of free
speech
 in a free
society
. Some object to absolute
freedom
 of
speech
. Others advocate free
speech
, arguing that
freedom
 of
speech
 is the single most important political right of citizens in a civilized
society
. Whilst I believe that there are strong arguments on both sides, I would suggest that
freedom
 of
speech
 should be protected in all but extreme circumstances.
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speech
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society
. Yet it is most important for the governments. A government which does not know what the people feel and think is in a dangerous position.
This
 is how the communist regimes of Eastern Europe were toppled in the 1980s. The same is happening again in other regions of the world today. The governments that muzzle free
speech
 run a risk of pushing their people to behave destructively or to rebel.
Furthermore
, without free
speech
 no political action is possible and no resistance to injustice and oppression is possible. Without free
speech
, elections would have no meaning at all. The policies of contestants become known to the public and become responsive to public opinion only by virtue of free
speech
. Between elections, the freely expressed opinions of citizens help restrain oppressive rule. Without
this
freedom
, it is futile to expect political
freedom
 or
consequently
 economic
freedom
. In conclusion, I believe that the importance of free
speech
 as a basic and valuable characteristic of a free
society
 cannot be underestimated. It may be challenging for
society
 to allow differences of opinion out into the open;
however
, the consequences of restricting free
speech
 are likely to be more damaging in the longer term.
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Consider expanding on your main points by providing more detailed examples that directly support your argument. While you've made your opinion clear, the lack of specific examples can weaken your overall argument's impact.
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Ensure a logical flow by better linking sentences and paragraphs. The essay certainly follows a clear structure, which is commendable, but you could enhance the logical connection of ideas from one sentence to another, particularly in the body paragraphs.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • democratic process
  • self-expression
  • censorship
  • marketplace of ideas
  • hate speech
  • misinformation
  • transparency
  • accountability
  • regulation
  • human rights
  • civil liberties
  • public safety
  • free discourse
  • intellectual diversity
  • echo chambers
  • public interest
  • suppress
  • oppression
  • autonomy
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