The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The charts below indicate the rate of rain used for several purposes in six areas of the world namely North
America
, South America
, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asian country
.
At first glance, the proportion of liquid counted in six territories mainly is distributed for three main purposes: Industrial operation, agricultural practice and domestic use. Fix the agreement mistake
countries
While
in North America
and Europe, the amount of water used for industrial purposes is much bigger than two
Correct determiner usage
the
others
, the percentage of liquid used for agriculture in South Correct quantifier usage
other
America
, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia accounted for the major part of the all.
The water used for Industry in North America
and Europe is much more than other objectives, accounting for 48% and 53% respectively. The two remaining have a similar rate. It shows that Industry is the main field of these areas, followed it is agriculture and population.
On the contrary
, South America
and the three areas have different structures. The percentage of water used for agricultural use accounted for the major parts and was likely much bigger than other uses.Submitted by aesacademyforenglishstudy on
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