living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause seroius social problems ,as well as practical problems .to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today's modern world, everyone wants to get to know about the different places of
this
globe and all
this
can be possible by learning numerous different languages.so, I am in the same mind that one has to
face
myriad obstacles
while
living in a different country.
To begin
with, speaking a totally opposite
language
can cause communication
problems
.As the individual can not express his or her feelings to another
person
without speaking the common
language
.
Moreover
, without a familiar ,
language
it can cause a
language
barrier and the
person
can not make new friends circle.
For instance
, if the
person
is in a different country or workplace it is very hard for him to know about the environment and his co-workers without knowing their national
language
or the same
language
which will affect his daily life as well.
In addition
to
this
, learning a different
Language
can
also
make the
person
less social. Many students move to different countries for their higher education and a good quality future. They can not talk properly with their neighbours and
this
will make them lonely. As they
face
to
face
them on a daily basis.They have to
face
cultural and religious
problems
as well
for example
, in a foreign country people are very curious about their functions and festivals and they celebrate with their neighbours as well it will be challenging for the visitors to fit in
this
. In conclusion, we can not deny the fact that people have to deal with various
problems
in different countries without learning their local or national
language
. All these
problems
can be solved by learning various languages
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