The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815.
The given maps illustrate the main changes that have taken place in Westley from 1815 up until the present moment.
Overall
, since 1815, Westley has undergone several changes, most significantly the development of residential and business areas as well as
the extension of the railway station.
In 1815, the town
primarily consisted of farms and residential houses located in
the south side of the Change preposition
on
town
, which was occupied by houses, a town
hall and a market square. The central and north sides of the town
consisted of various greenery,and a church and opposite the road is Lord Westley's House located near Tinton Village.
Since 1815, the houses have been demolished to further
accommodate the needs of businesses and residential areas, whilst there have been no changes made to the town
hall and market square. Subsequently
, the fields have been replaced to further
extend the railway station and renovation of road work. In addition
to the West Gate Shopping Centre, the Museum and Sports Centre were made to modernise the town
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