The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815.

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815.
The given maps illustrate the main changes that have taken place in Westley from 1815 up until the present moment.
Overall
, since 1815, Westley has undergone several changes, most significantly the development of residential and business areas
as well as
the extension of the railway station. In 1815, the
town
primarily consisted of farms and residential houses located
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the south side of the
town
, which was occupied by houses, a
town
hall and a market square. The central and north sides of the
town
consisted of various greenery,and a church and opposite the road is Lord Westley's House located near Tinton Village. Since 1815, the houses have been demolished to
further
accommodate the needs of businesses and residential areas, whilst there have been no changes made to the
town
hall and market square.
Subsequently
, the fields have been replaced to
further
extend the railway station and renovation of road work.
In addition
to the West Gate Shopping Centre, the Museum and Sports Centre were made to modernise the
town
.
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