You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline Company, write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your bag and tell them what was in it and what they were going to do about it?
Dear sir,
I am writing about my bag which was lost when I was travelling to New Delhi on Indigo Airlines
last
week on 16th September. I complained to the on-board staff he told me to wait at
the luggage section; but, I did not get any appropriate help.
To be honest, I lost my luggage when I arrived at New Delhi airport. Change preposition
in
In other words
, after arriving at the airport when I went to the luggage section my suitcase did not appear on the belt; however
, I had been waiting
for one hour there but nothing happened.
Wrong verb form
waited
Moreover
, about the bag, it was red in colour with a cross mark on the top of it. Also
, it had valuable items related to my workplace such
as a laptop, company documents and a credit card.
Therefore
, it will affect my work as it depends on laptop
and files.
I request that you please try to find it on an immediate basis as I will not work without my laptop. Correct pronoun usage
my laptop
Also
, I would be grateful if you transferred my bag to my resident address whenever you find it.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
AnkitSubmitted by ankitkaushik4657 on
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Complete Response
Include more specific details, such as the flight number and the exact actions you have already taken to locate the bag.
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Greeting and Closing
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Suitable Writing Tone
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- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
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