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Some people think that a person can never understand the culture of a country unless they speak the language. Do you agree with this opinion?

#people #person #culture #country #language
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It is indeed true that
language
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 is an essential tool for communication with
people
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. Most countries have their own
language
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 but in every
countries
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 majority of
people
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 know English because it is an international mother tongue. I entirely disagree with
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 statement because in my opinion
language
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 is not important for understanding a
culture
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. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss my point of view and what I believe.
Firstly
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,
People
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 can easily find any data
from
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on
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Internet
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such
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 as history, inventions,
cultures
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 so on. In
this
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 modern time, individuals can translate any
language
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 by using Google Translate.
As a result
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,
people
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 can read any cultural article (
other
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language
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article
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) from the internet by using Google
translate
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.
Secondly
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, some individuals learn foreign
cultures
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 to watch foreign movies which
are
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is
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 not important to know the
language
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 for watching foreign TV shows or movies because international movies and TV shows have subtitles.
On the other hand
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, Some individuals believe that
language
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 is important for
better known
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culture
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. Some
spect
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see
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this
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 statement
true
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as true
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 because
language
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help
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helps
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 to learn and understand a
culture
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esaely
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easily
.
For instance
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,
world
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the world
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 has lots of
people
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 who do not have any idea about the
Japaness
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Japanese
language
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 but they know about the
culture
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 because
peoples
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people
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 can learn
culture
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 from books. Not only
books
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book
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only
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options but
also
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 some
people
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 who
are
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have
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 visited Japan and
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also
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who know the
cultures
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,
To sum up
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,
Language
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play
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 a vital role
to communicate
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in communicating
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people
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with people
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 but
that is
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 not
only
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the only
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 way to understand foreign
cultures
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. In
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this
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these
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mordern
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modern
 times,
individual
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individuals
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 have
severls
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several
severals
way
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ways
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 to learn
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cultures
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about cultures
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.
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