In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the fast

food

industry

has developed significantly and become common for

residents

, junk

food

being well-known for its convenience and cheap cost.

While

a number of notions believe that policymakers should increase

taxes

on these foods to prevent

residents

from suffering from unhealthy lifestyles and diseases, other views suggest that it is not necessary. In my point of view,

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prefer the latter rather than the former.

Firstly

, the fact that fast

food

helps many people economize their time to work,

while

can enjoy their breakfast with full nutrition.

Besides

, these foods usually come out at a suitable price that most citizens can afford . With a variety of menus, fast

food

restaurants

can provide different meals and tastes for every customer.

Moreover

, not only about the

food

,

residents

seem to be satisfied with the services of the

restaurants

. Take McDonald's as a great example, their

restaurants

serve customers with a drive-through takeaway, which both economizes their time and easier to work with the purchaser. So if policymakers decided to put higher

taxes

on the junk-

food

industry

without any

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, it could be harmful to both the economy and the

residents

. Poor people might find it difficult to afford

food

in fancy

restaurants

or even to purchase a sandwich

due to

the INCREASE IN

taxes

. It

also

can have a DETRIMENTAL effect on the fast-

food

industry

, which soon will make these

restaurants

become

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bankrupt.

Instead

of raising

taxes

on fast foodfood, the government should suggest these

restaurants

introduce to consumers healthy

food

such

as

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salad, crushed potatoes and so on.

This

can reduce the number of

residents

who suffer from obesity

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while

keeping the

taxes

the same as it used to be.

To sum up

, despite the fact that people should pay more attention to their health and avoid eating too much junk

foodfood

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food food

, we still have better solutions to solve

this

problem rather than increased

taxes

on

fast-

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food

industry

.