In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the fast

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industry

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has developed significantly and become common for

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, junk

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being well-known for its convenience and cheap cost.

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a number of notions believe that policymakers should increase

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on these foods to prevent

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from suffering from unhealthy lifestyles and diseases, other views suggest that it is not necessary. In my point of view,

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prefer the latter rather than the former.

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, the fact that fast

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helps many people economize their time to work,

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can enjoy their breakfast with full nutrition.

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, these foods usually come out at a suitable price that most citizens can afford . With a variety of menus, fast

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restaurants

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can provide different meals and tastes for every customer.

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, not only about the

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,

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seem to be satisfied with the services of the

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. Take McDonald's as a great example, their

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serve customers with a drive-through takeaway, which both economizes their time and easier to work with the purchaser. So if policymakers decided to put higher

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on the junk-

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industry

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without any

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, it could be harmful to both the economy and the

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. Poor people might find it difficult to afford

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in fancy

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or even to purchase a sandwich

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can have a DETRIMENTAL effect on the fast-

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industry

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, which soon will make these

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become

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bankrupt.

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of raising

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on fast foodfood, the government should suggest these

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introduce to consumers healthy

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as

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salad, crushed potatoes and so on.

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can reduce the number of

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who suffer from obesity

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keeping the

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the same as it used to be.

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, despite the fact that people should pay more attention to their health and avoid eating too much junk

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, we still have better solutions to solve

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problem rather than increased

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on

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industry

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