A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
These days,
people
are being judged on the basis of their materialistic things and financial status in society. Also
, moral values
and respect
are considered as
an unimportant part of life. In my opinion, Change preposition
apply
people
determine each other through valuable possessions, but some of the population still values
honour and ethnicity.
To begin
with, in this
modern world, the first thing that people
notice about each other is materialistic possessions such
as bank balance, business, cars and prices of houses. Also
, social media has provided an opportunity to keep an eye on individuals' materialistic things. Moreover
, in developed as well as
in developing countries people
who are rich and have a high social status are given priority, respect
, preference and platforms to build relationships. For instance
, a young girl or a boy, who belongs to a rich background often attracts more wedding proposals and a large number of work opportunities due to
high social rank.
Contrarily, respect
, kindness, and faith also
hold a significant place in certain individuals' lives. For example
, highly educated people
, elderly people
, and villagers always give preference to moral values
and honour. Through education, life experiences, and a rustic lifestyle they gain an in-depth understanding of the role of values
and morals in people
's lives and relationships. To be more specific, most of the Indian population adopt moral values
in their lives and they respect
personalities such
as Ratan Tata, Sudha Murthy, Satinder Sartaj, etc. who connect them with their values
and humanity.
To conclude
, I fervently believe that due to
modernisation, people
have begun giving value to material possessions and net worth. Whereas
, some individuals still embrace historical values
and consider moral values
over financial status.Submitted by varindervarinder1996 on
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