A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

These days,
people
are being judged on the basis of their materialistic things and financial status in society.
Also
, moral
values
and
respect
are considered
as
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an unimportant part of life. In my opinion,
people
determine each other through valuable possessions, but some of the population still
values
honour and ethnicity.
To begin
with, in
this
modern world, the first thing that
people
notice about each other is materialistic possessions
such
as bank balance, business, cars and prices of houses.
Also
, social media has provided an opportunity to keep an eye on individuals' materialistic things.
Moreover
, in developed
as well as
in developing countries
people
who are rich and have a high social status are given priority,
respect
, preference and platforms to build relationships.
For instance
, a young girl or a boy, who belongs to a rich background often attracts more wedding proposals and a large number of work opportunities
due to
high social rank. Contrarily,
respect
, kindness, and faith
also
hold a significant place in certain individuals' lives.
For example
, highly educated
people
, elderly
people
, and villagers always give preference to moral
values
and honour. Through education, life experiences, and a rustic lifestyle they gain an in-depth understanding of the role of
values
and morals in
people
's lives and relationships. To be more specific, most of the Indian population adopt moral
values
in their lives and they
respect
personalities
such
as Ratan Tata, Sudha Murthy, Satinder Sartaj, etc. who connect them with their
values
and humanity.
To conclude
, I fervently believe that
due to
modernisation,
people
have begun giving value to material possessions and net worth.
Whereas
, some individuals still embrace historical
values
and consider moral
values
over financial status.
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task response
Provide a more balanced view by discussing the opposing argument before concluding.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are well-presented. Ensure that the body paragraphs support the main points effectively, and use transition words to improve coherence.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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