A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
These days,
people
are being judged on the basis of their materialistic things and financial status in society. Use synonyms
Also
, moral Linking Words
values
and Use synonyms
respect
are considered Use synonyms
as
an unimportant part of life. In my opinion, Change preposition
apply
people
determine each other through valuable possessions, but some of the population still Use synonyms
values
honour and ethnicity.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, in Linking Words
this
modern world, the first thing that Linking Words
people
notice about each other is materialistic possessions Use synonyms
such
as bank balance, business, cars and prices of houses. Linking Words
Also
, social media has provided an opportunity to keep an eye on individuals' materialistic things. Linking Words
Moreover
, in developed Linking Words
as well as
in developing countries Linking Words
people
who are rich and have a high social status are given priority, Use synonyms
respect
, preference and platforms to build relationships. Use synonyms
For instance
, a young girl or a boy, who belongs to a rich background often attracts more wedding proposals and a large number of work opportunities Linking Words
due to
high social rank.
Contrarily, Linking Words
respect
, kindness, and faith Use synonyms
also
hold a significant place in certain individuals' lives. Linking Words
For example
, highly educated Linking Words
people
, elderly Use synonyms
people
, and villagers always give preference to moral Use synonyms
values
and honour. Through education, life experiences, and a rustic lifestyle they gain an in-depth understanding of the role of Use synonyms
values
and morals in Use synonyms
people
's lives and relationships. To be more specific, most of the Indian population adopt moral Use synonyms
values
in their lives and they Use synonyms
respect
personalities Use synonyms
such
as Ratan Tata, Sudha Murthy, Satinder Sartaj, etc. who connect them with their Linking Words
values
and humanity.
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To conclude
, I fervently believe that Linking Words
due to
modernisation, Linking Words
people
have begun giving value to material possessions and net worth. Use synonyms
Whereas
, some individuals still embrace historical Linking Words
values
and consider moral Use synonyms
values
over financial status.Use synonyms
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