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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The plans below show how the ground floor of a particular building has changed over time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The diagrams
illustrates
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 the
architecture
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architectural
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tranformations
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transformations
transformation
 a
cerain
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certain
 building's first
floor
 underwent throughout three different periods.
To begin
 with, it can be inferred from the layouts that the
floor
 was originally a workplace in the late 1900's.
This
 can be reflected in the number of rooms, six in total, to accommodate the workers.
However
,
this
 resulted in the small sizes of these spaces, especially the assistant's and secretary's offices, as comfort seemed to not be prioritized during the
designing
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. By the year 1985, the office
has
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had
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 been converted into an apartment. The accommodations were
then
 planned to house
less
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fewer
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 people, as now there are only two bedrooms, having
replacing
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 the
manager
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manager's
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 office and the reception area. The bottom left of the
floor
, which used to include a toilet, was expanded and turned into a full bathroom. The
floor
 was
then
 repurposed once more at the
begining
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beginning
 of the
21th
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21st
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 century, now converted into a
flowershop
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flower shop
instead
. Most of the spaces are now occupied by flower displays. We can
also
 see that one of the bedrooms was repurposed into an office,
while
 the other was broken down for flowers. Throughout these design outlines,
however
, it can
also
 noted that the only
areathat
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area that
 hasn't been changed over the years is the kitchen.
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